Sneaky, Naughty Sex
filed in Man Stories on May.29, 1987
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Things are better when they’re forbidden. It’s just a fact of life.
They say that people want what they can’t have.
Drinking is more fun when you’re underage. Girls love bad boys. Actors want to be rock stars and rock stars want to be actors. Teenage boys want MILFs and men want barely legal coeds. And of course, there’s just something about having sex with someone you’re not supposed to, in a place you’re not supposed to, in front of people you’re not supposed to.
A friend once told me that he had sex with his girlfriend at a sleepover, when all his friends were sleeping around him in sleeping bags.
I told him I could do better.
In the summer, the unit of time is not minutes, or hours, or days, or weeks, or even months. The unit of time is parties. Life becomes judged based on parties.
The McDonalds run where Sarah puked on the drive-thru speaker: that was the 4th party of the Summer. The time that Josh and his girlfriend got into an awful fight in the living room at a house party, and everyone else ended up huddled on the patio to wait it out: 7th party. The party where everyone got sick from eating marijuana brownies because my friends cooked actual marijuana leaves into the brownies: 3rd party. And the time of Truth or Dare and the sneaky, naughty sex: 8th party of the summer.
It’s funny how so many innocent childhood activities can suddenly become highly sexually charged when you’re an adult: wrestling, tickling, Twister, piggybacks, and of course, Truth or Dare.
There were five of us for this particular party. Besides myself, there was Greg and Scott, two of my friends from work; Sarah, a friend of mine from school with a sarcastic but cute demeanour; and of course, the girl without whom, this story would not exist: Jill.
Jill was the type of girl that would never let you be bored. She was spontaneous and easy going. She had a smile and a laugh that could just light up a room. And try as you might, it was almost impossible to have an awkward moment with her, no matter what you ever said or did.
She was also one of the cutest and quirkiest friends I had at the time.
Jill was a tall, slender brunette. She wore her hair in a pony tail all the time, and somehow that just made her sexier. Being slender, she had naturally small breasts, but they were always perky, which somehow fit with her personality. And her ass was a little bigger than you might expect for her physique, but big in a good way, if you know what I mean.
Jill was a sexy cutie. And she was just a friend.
Jill and I had always casually flirted, but nothing really ever came of it. I guess it was the kind of flirting that was borderline brotherly-sisterly rivalry. It was subtly sexual, but usually more friendly and fun focused.
If you asked me now why I never really looked at Jill as anything more than a friend, I couldn’t tell you. Maybe I’d just known her for too long. For most of the time that I’d known her, I had a girlfriend in some way, shape, or form, so maybe that was an issue too. But even after I became single, it just never clicked in my head that our flirting meant anything more to either of us than friendly banter.
Whatever the reasons for our asexual relationship, everything changed the night we all played Truth or Dare.
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We all meet up in Sarah’s basement, because her parents are away. Greg and Scott show up with a few cases of beer. We all crack open a bottle and toast to the color purple. So begins our party.
A few hours in, everyone is drunk. We’re being stupid and silly. People are making bad jokes and fools of themselves. People are getting laughed at and laughed with. We do a round of shots. It doesn’t help matters.
The entire party, Jill and I have been flirting with one another.
She steals my beer, I steal her seat.
She sits on my lap, I tickle her.
She tickles me back, I lift her over my shoulder.
She pinches me, I slap her ass.
Okay, so maybe it is a little more than just casual flirting.
It’s around this time that someone suggests we play a game.
“What should we play?” I ask.
Greg suggests Kings.
“We already played that,” Sarah complains.
“So what?” Greg retorts.
“I can’t do another drinking game,” she moans.
“Never Have I Ever?” Scott suggests.
“I don’t know,” Greg whines.
I’m about to support the Never Have I Ever suggestion when suddenly Jill shouts, “Truth or Dare!”
We all look at each other.
Truth or Dare is one of those games that everyone plays, and everyone accepts as just an innocent, fun game; but secretly, implicitly, everyone understands what it really is. No one who plays Truth or Dare will deny that within one or two turns it becomes highly dirty and sexual.
It’s funny how so many innocent childhood activities can suddenly become highly sexually charged when you’re an adult...
We all casually shrug or agree to play, trying our best not to appear too enthusiastic.
“I guess,” I say nonchalantly.
“Whatever,” Sarah adds.
Greg shrugs.
“Great!” Jill throws an empty beer bottle on the table and spins it. It hits Sarah.
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The game starts innocently enough. Sarah’s first dare is a hand stand. She uses the wall to prop herself up, but neglects to tuck her shirt in before she does, so we all get a flash of her bra.
Greg get’s hit next and picks truth. He ends up telling us about the gayest thing he’s ever done. I won’t repeat it here, for Greg’s sake. Suffice to say that, later in the game, when Sarah dares Greg to lick Scott’s face, that isn’t the gayest thing Greg has ever done.
Next it hits Scott, and he ends up having to go outside and scream into the night that he has the hots for Orlando Bloom. At first we think it’s kind of an easy dare, until we hear someone in the night shout back, “You’re a homo!”
And so the game goes.
People tell us who their crushes are, the worst thing they’ve done in a relationship, what sexual act is their least favourite, how many people they’ve fucked, and the last time they got laid.
People do handstands and push ups. Greg and Scott trade shirts; then Greg and Sarah.
Greg sitting there in a girl’s V-neck shirt, tightly accentuating his upper body, this still isn’t the gayest thing Greg’s ever done.
Then the girl-on-girl kiss, a staple to every true game of Truth or Dare. The retaliation is Greg licking Scott’s face. I moon the group one dare later.
We all try our best to humiliate or embarrass each other when we get the chance with the most embarrassing truths and dares we can think of.
It’s around this time that I get a dare from the next level: “Take off your pants.”
“Whoa!” Greg exclaims. “I don’t want him to do that one. I already had to see his ass tonight.”
“Yeah,” Scott agrees.
“Oh come on,” Sarah whines. “I had to kiss Jill. Drop your pants!”
I start to protest, but Sarah and Jill team up against me. “Do it!”
I sigh, “What’s the truth?” as I consider taking the truth instead of the dare.
“There is none,” Jill states.
“What?!” I exclaim. “You can’t do that!”
“I just did,” she grins widely.
Sarah shrugs, “She said it.”
I huff. I’m pretty sure that’s not allowed, but I’m drunk and tired and so I bargain: “I’ll take off my pants but I get a blanket to cover up with.”
“I don’t know...” Sarah replies unconvinced.
I shrug, “Well that’s the best you’re going to get.”
“You have to play the rest of the game without pants,” Jill tells me.
“I will,” I promise, “but I get the blanket.”
They both look at each other and then nod.
“Ok fine,” Sarah agrees. “Now drop your pants.”
Greg and Scott both shield their eyes. Jill and Sarah are watching me intently with schoolgirl-grins across their faces.
I reluctantly drop my pants.
“Tell me when he’s wearing the blanket,” Greg asks the girls.
“He’s wearing the blanket,” Jill teases.
“I don’t believe you!” Greg stammers.
I stand there in my boxers and kick my pants away. “Can I have a blanket now?”
Sarah laughs and tosses me a blanket. I wrap it around my waist like a towel and sit back down on the couch.
I spin the bottle and it lands on Jill. She picks dare.
Sweet revenge.
I smirk, “Drop your pants.”
“What?!” she exclaims.
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“Yeah!” the guys both hoot in support.
“Come on,” she whines.
“Yeah we just did that dare,” Sarah adds.
“Hey! I did it,” I remind her.
“Sarah made you take off your pants though! Not me!” Jill argues.
“Yeah,” I reply with a cocky grin. “That kind of sucks that you’re getting punished for it. Well, off with ‘em.”
Sarah is laughing.
The guys are nodding in agreement with me. They just want to see Jill in her panties.
Jill rolls her eyes, “Fine!” Somehow I was expecting more of a fight. “But I’m using that blanket too!”
“I can live with that,” I say.
Sarah nods, “It’s fair.”
Jill slips out of her jeans. This time the guys don’t shield their eyes. She takes longer to get out of her pants than I did because her pants are far tighter. She wrestles to get them down and kick them off.
Once pantsless, she holds out her arms and spins around, giving everyone a full view. She’s wearing cute pink undies that hug her ass.
“Happy?” she asks.
“Could we get one more turn around?” Scott asks.
Jill shoots him an unimpressed look. Guess that’s a “No”.
We’re all laughing. Sarah is shaking her head, no doubt unimpressed with our horny male gawking.
“Okay, good enough,” I tell her.
Down to her underwear, Jill pulls up the blanket I’m huddled in and sits down beside me.
“We’re now officially frenemies,” she informs me.
“What’s that mean?” I ask.
“It means, you better hope that bottle doesn’t land on you when I’m spinning it.” She slides in close to me, and I come to feel her soft, naked legs against mine.
“I’m terrified,” I reply sarcastically.
Jill just grins.
The game continues.
Jill and I fight over the blankets at different points. The guys keep making snide and sarcastic remarks about hand jobs under the covers. We just laugh it off. It’s innocent flirting right?
A few more turns go by, and at some point, Jill reaches under the blankets and pinches my leg. I slap her hand and pinch her’s for retribution.
“Hey! What’s going on under there?” Greg snaps.
“Under where?” Jill smiles.
“Har har,” Greg laughs sarcastically.
Sarah giggles.
“How long have you been waiting to use that gem?” I ask Jill.
“Since I got under here,” Jill winks.
“Behave you two,” Sarah tells us.
“She’s just pinching me,” I say.
“No foreplay?” Scott asks.
“I wish,” I say sarcastically.
“Awww,” Sarah pretends to be sympathetic.
The pinching has stopped, but I notice that Jill’s hand is still resting on my leg, having never been withdrawn after the pinch. So I leave my hand resting on hers. Her leg is so soft and smooth and well, naked.
I’ve flirted with Jill thousands of times before. We’ve cuddled and tickled and pinched each other more times than I can count. But this is the first time that we’ve ever touched each other’s naked thighs. And I know it sounds totally grade-eight-ish of me, but something changes at that point.
I think that this was the exact moment that realized there was actually something between us.
She shoots me an unusual smile.
I smile back.
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The game progresses, and Scott gives the bottle a spin. It comes to rest on Jill.
Scott smiles. “Make out with JD.”
Jill looks over at me awkwardly. I’m giving her the same awkward look. In unison, our hands withdraw from one another’s thighs.
Somehow, despite the chemistry we both were feeling, being forced into it is not how we want it to happen.
“I don’t know,” I tell her.
“Yeah,” she agrees. “What’s the truth?”
Scott laughs, “There’s no truth on this one.”
Sarah rolls her eyes, “We should just start calling this game Dare.”
“There has to be a truth!” Jill protests.
“Nope,” Scott says smugly.
“Give her a truth man,” I tell him.
“Hey, I’m trying to help you out here man!” he exclaims.
“Okay, okay... what about another dare?” I offer.
Scott thinks for a minute. “Okay... well, straddle him then.”
Jill looks at me again. I shrug on this one. “Whatever.”
“Reverse cowgirl?” she asks. “So I can still see everyone and play the game?”
“Sure,” Scott nods.
Jill shrugs. So do I.
“Well if you’re okay with it...” she starts.
“You’ve sat on my lap plenty before,” I say casually.
Jill lifts up the blanket and crawls on top of me. She turns her ass to face me and then positions herself over my lap and leans back. I’m just casually slouching not really paying attention, when suddenly I feel a jab.
“Ow!” I mumble under my breath. I sit up for a second.
“Sorry,” she whispers, as she looks at me over her shoulder. She pulls her ass back up and repositions.
I look up at her with a shocked face and realize what just happened.
I guess I was too drunk, or too distracted, or too tired. I didn’t notice until just now, but I’ve got a fully erect hard on. I’ve got a fully erect hard on and Jill just sat on it!
She gives me a mix of an apologetic and naughty look. With panicked, wide eyes, I look up at her. If I had realized I had a hard on I never would’ve agreed to this dare. Luckily she’s holding the blanket up, hiding this all from everyone else in the room.
She grinds her ass into my erect member and smiles at me. I instinctively put my hands on her hips and guide her, pulling her in tighter. My dick flips up into her ass crack.
Holy shit...
Everyone else is laughing at her straddling me. If only they knew. I pull the blankets over us more, to make sure no one sees what’s happening. She looks me in the eyes and pushes her ass onto my dick a little more as she smirks.
“Jill,” Greg calls.
She clenches her naked legs down on mine. The sensation is amazing. I rub my hand down her soft, smooth thigh. She feels so gentle and sensual, yet the look she’s giving me is almost dangerous.
“Jill!” Greg interrupts. “It’s your turn!”
“Sorry,” she says with a mischievous grin. “JD’s just being a dick.”
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Like I said before, I never really considered Jill as anything more than friend. But now, here, with sex feeling so close, I want her more than any other girl I’ve ever wanted.
It makes so much sense. Jill and I are such amazing friends. We get along so easily, have so much fun together, and god she’s got an amazingly cute booty.
Jill presses her tight ass into my penis periodically, distracting me from what I’m doing. I think she likes to torture me like this. Oddly enough, I kind of enjoy the torture.
The game is moving more slowly now, with more idle conversation between turns. Such as Scott and Greg repeatedly making jokes about anal sex and me fucking Jill, to the behest of Sarah.
The only strategy in this situation is to play innocent.
“Dude this is nothing new for us,” I reply. I feel Jill clench her bum, which rubs my cock and I nonchalantly sigh in response.
“Straddling each other in your underwear?” Greg laughs.
I shake my head. “Like I said before, she’s sat on my lap plenty.”
She subtly caresses my thigh.
“I bet you have a raging woody,” Scott says.
I laugh and tell him to get out his camera if he wants to check.
He just waves it off.
Jill reaches forward for her beer and lifts her ass to the tip of my penis, as she leans back to sit down again she lets the back of her panties slide down the length of my dick.
I’m so horny I’m sweating.
Lucky for me Scott didn’t call my bluff.
“Oh Daddy! Give me that limp peanut,” Jill says in a sarcastic tone, as she bites her lip. We all laugh it off, but the ironic part is they’re right about us right now.
Jill rubs her ass into my dick a bit harder. I think this almost-getting-caught stuff is turning her on. She’s still biting her lip, no longer in a sarcastic manner.
“Can we please stop talking about JD’s penis?” Sarah asks. “They’re our fucking friends you guys.”
Scott and Greg roll their eyes. Guys never get tired of talking about their friend’s penis if they think it may be in a perilous situation.
“JD’s got a woody like this conversation is getting me wet,” Sarah defends.
I wonder for a moment if Sarah is really wet at the moment, because I’m clearly hard as a penis-shaped brick.
I expect Jill to continue tempting me with her ass when suddenly, out of nowhere, she interrupts everything: “I’ve got to use the washroom.” She stands up quickly, pulling one of the blankets away with her, and tossing another one on my lap casually. Luckily, or intentionally, it lands just right to hide my extended penis.
Greg pretends to look the blanket over for signs of an erection buried underneath.
“Do you want to come over here and dig man?” I ask him sarcastically.
He laughs, “Naw I’m just joking man.”
In my head I breathe a sigh of relief.
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When Jill returns from the washroom, blanket still wrapped around her waist like a towel, Scott blurts drunkenly out, “You have to go back to straddling him.”
“Okay, okay,” Jill says, pretending to be bothered by that fact.
She carefully positions the blankets and crawls back on the couch with me. Scott and Greg are trying to catch a view of her in her underwear, but she’s meticulous with the blankets, and they get nothing.
Ironically, if she wasn’t so careful, Scott and Greg would’ve been treated to a better view than Jill in her underwear. As she positions herself back on top of me I feel her put something in my hand. I look down.
It’s her underwear.
Holy shit...
I look up and see her naked ass hovering over me, legs spread apart. She stares at me and nods ever so softly, as to not be perceptible by the others.
Implicitly, I understand. She nods as if asking me whether to continue.
I nod back casually.
In the rearranging of the blankets, she expertly unbuttons the fly of my boxers and slides my dick out. She squats over me, her pussy lips hovering just over the tip of my penis and nods again, as if double checking.
I nod again.
She smiles. She gently lowers herself onto my lap; my cock slides into her wet pussy as she does.
It’s all I can do to keep a normal expression on my face.
Three of my friends are sitting around watching her “straddle” me under the blankets, and I have to pretend that nothing is happened.
“This is such a stupid dare,” I tell Scott, referring to the straddling. I figure bluffing has worked thus far to distract everyone from what’s really been going on.
He shrugs.
Jill plunges the entire length of my cock deep into her mound.
“At least the other dares were over at some point,” I continue, trying desperately not to moan.
“Whatever dude,” he says an unimpressed tone. “Just trying to help you.”
I shake my head, continuing the ruse.
Jill leans forward to spin the bottle and raises herself off my dick. She lets out a sigh as she leans back for our second full penetration of the evening.
“Tired?” Greg asks.
“Yeah,” she says, pretending to yawn. She sits down completely, again taking my full length inside her. “Actually,” she continues, “my legs are getting tired from straddling JD for this long.” She starts to push herself up and down, pretending for the group that she’s stretching her legs, while I close my eyes and pretend to yawn at the ecstasy of my hot friend fucking me right there on the couch.
“You’re tired too?” Sarah asks me, in reference to my yawning.
“Uh,” I say, mind cluttered with fucking.
Jill pumps her ass up and down again, and I am forced to hide another gasp with another yawn.
“Yeah,” I lie. “I’m sooo tired.”
“You better be!” Jill tells me as she continues “stretching”.
“I am!” I smirk.
“You guys are weird,” Sarah tells us.
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It’s fucked up trying to have normal conversations with your friends while you have sex. Just looking at their faces while Jill fucks me is kind of disturbing. The game continues as Jill slowly, secretly screws me under the blankets.
Every time she thrusts I have to concentrate on breathing normally so that I don’t moan or gasp.
Every time she wiggles her hips I want to push her down on all fours and start ramming her from behind. I want to pull at her hair and rip off her shirt. I want to have her naked and bone her and slap her ass and have her call my name.
But instead, I sit quietly on the sofa, watching my friends spin a bottle and give each other increasingly more boring and uncreative dares. It’s the nature of Truth or Dare to start out strong and get lamer over time, as everyone runs out of risqué dares to give without crossing the line.
After a minute I notice that I’ve been staring at Greg for what feels like forever. I realize it’s starting to feel like I’m having sex with him. I feel a disgusted look creep across my face. He notices my look and pauses. He stops munching on chips and just stares at me.
“What? Dude do I have chips all over my face or something?” he asks me.
“No!” I exclaim, now with a more confused and awkward look on my face.
“Uhhh...” He’s still staring at me, totally confused as to why I’m making faces, so I quickly look over to Sarah.
“Yeah?” she asks.
“Huh?!” I respond instinctively. My mind is fully on the thrusting vagina which is currently enveloping my penis and not on who I’m talking to.
“What is it?” she asks.
“What?” I reply.
“I don’t know. What do you want?”
Jill pumps again in secret. I can’t think right now.
“What do you mean?” I ask.
“You looked at me?” she says. “What, do, you, want, J, D?!”
“A guy can’t look?” I reply.
“O... K...” she says and turns away from me.
Jill pushes back down and I gasp ever so quietly under my breath.
I’m still staring at Sarah, unable to formulate a plan of where to look next.
“What?!” she repeats. “Stop staring at me man!”
“JD,” Jill says, “stop being weird.”
“Nothing,” I say, as I turn away from Sarah.
I almost moan instinctively from the sex.
In my mind I start to try and predict how this is going to end. Unfortunately, I start to think more and more that this is going to end badly.
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The game goes on. Truths have dropped out of the game. We’ve run out of things to ask each other. Dares are getting sloppy and lazy too, especially from me and Jill. It’s like we’re highly distracted, probably because we are.
Jill keeps yawning and stretching her arms. I’ve been secretly squeezing her ass under the blankets for a while now. I’m trying not to do it too much, in case I rouse a reaction out of Jill. She’s already had to fake a few hiccups when I’ve squeezed her too hard or too suddenly.
“I dare you to answer the truth,” Greg tells Sarah.
Sarah rolls her eyes.
Jill keeps finding weak excuses to move her ass. She reaches for chips, her drink, the bottle, even when it’s not her turn, she reaches forward to pass it to the next person. And every time she leans forward she lifts her pussy up and then back down on top of my throbbing cock.
I’m trying to look normal, but it’s getting worse the more we fuck. At first I could hold it together quite well. But now I’m getting too close to cumming. I have to concentrate on being subtle. I almost want to tell Jill to stop, but a big part of me, probably the penis, doesn’t.
Jill thrusts a few more times. Every time she thrusts on top of me, I hold my breath. Despite trying to feign normality, I have a look of forced concentration. I probably look like I’m trying real hard to push out a shit.
I briefly consider the irony that Jill and I refused to make out with each other earlier in the night. Yet here we are sneakily fucking under blankets in front of our friends.
I want so badly to squeeze her tits or kiss her neck. But I have to settle for more squeezing of her ass and rubbing of her naked thighs instead.
It’s Scott’s turn to give Greg a dare.
“Make out with Sarah,” he says.
“What?!” Sarah exclaims. “No!”
“Fine,” Scott replies, “Take off your top Sarah.”
“You’re supposed to give Greg a dare!”
Scott sighs. “Honestly... I have nothing left.... Have sex with Sarah.”
Jill slowly peers back at me at those words and we both give each other a quick smile. I squeeze her ass, hard. She slowly clenches her vagina down on my penis. I’m always amazed that girls can do that.
I gasp a bit under my breath, so does she.
Suddenly, Sarah jumps up in a moment of inspiration. “Wait!” she proclaims. “I’ve got it!”
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“What?” Greg asks.
Sarah leans over and whispers in Greg’s ear.
Greg laughs. “Really?”
“What’s the dare?” I ask.
“Ok?” Sarah asks Greg.
“I mean, are you sure? It’s too easy,” he says.
“It will be funny,” she tells him.
Jill takes this moment of distraction to get a few good thrusts in. She yawns again to hide another moan. God!
Greg leans over and whispers something to Scott.
Scott leans back, “Yeah that’s pretty good. Okay do that.”
Greg nods.
Sarah smiles, “Excellent.”
Despite the carnal lust I’m currently engaged in, I still try to maintain the semblance of normality with my friends. “What’s the dare?” I ask again.
“Yeah, what’s the dare?” Jill asks nonchalantly.
Greg turns to us, “I have to take a picture of you two.”
“That’s it?” Jill asks.
“Well,” he says, “you have to stay like that.”
“Like what?” I ask.
“Exactly as you are now. Her straddling you.”
“Ok?” I reply, still not understanding how this is really even a dare.
“It’s an incriminating photo,” Sarah says.
Jill and I look at each other; Sarah doesn’t know the half of it.
Jill pushes my dick further into her pussy and gives me a devious smile. I’m now convinced that having our friends here is turning her on. Hell, she is my friend. This whole situation is the epitome of sneaky, naughty sex. Somehow I sense that having a picture taken is only heightening the mood for her.
I just hope she doesn’t orgasm on camera.
We both shrug, pretending to be indifferent, like we’re not in the middle of fucking each other.
“This seems like more of a dare for us,” Jill says, “but ok.”
Greg picks up the camera and aims at us.
“Let me get in a better position,” Jill says, which is really a secret excuse to casually do me a bit more before the photo. She moves her hips around my dick and leans back for the photo.
“Say cheese guys,” Greg tells us.
“Cheese!”
We both smile.
And smile.
And smile.
But the flash doesn’t come.
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It’s our fault really. In some weird, twisted way, the fact that we convinced our friends that nothing was going on under the blankets is our fault. We were too good at bluffing, too convincing in our lies, too sneaky in our sex.
Despite all the jokes and accusations of naughty business between Jill and myself, no one really suspected anything. Maybe it was years of very sexual flirting that never led anywhere, or maybe it really was our convincing testimonials, but our friends didn’t suspect a thing. And that just makes this next part all the worse.
We wait and wait and wait for a flash that doesn’t come from Greg’s camera.
Finally, I shout through a strained smile, “Take the picture!”
And that’s when Greg hit’s us. “It’s a movie,” he informs us.
“A movie?” I ask confused, smile now dropped, as some part of me knows what’s coming.
“Yup!” Sarah exclaims. “Surprise!”
And with that Sarah and Scott grab our blankets and toss them off of us! The blankets fly up and away. In the slow motion replay you could see our faces instantly turn as white as cum guzzling ghosts the second that Sarah shouts “Surprise!”
Jill and I, both too shocked to react, just watch the blankets fly away. The blankets, which protected our dirty secret fuck session from the rest of our friends.
This was the dare: to get an embarrassing shot of Jill straddling me in her underwear. But they get more than they bargained for.
The blankets fly off of us in a heartbeat. Before I fully even realize what’s going on, my three friends are standing there, staring at my penis, buried deep in Jill’s pussy, my hands fully clenched around Jill’s naked ass, while Greg films the entire debacle.
The briefest of laughter from our friends suddenly dies as they realize what we’re doing, what we have been doing for most of the night.
“OH MY GOD!” Sarah exclaims.
“Whoa! Shit dude!” Scott yells.
Greg slowly looks up from the camera’s view screen to look at us directly, speechless.
Jill and I both just sit there frozen, like two deer caught fucking in headlights. Jill’s mouth is literally hanging open. I can’t speak. And I mean I can’t speak. I try to say something, anything, but no words come out.
“Ba Bub Ja,” I mumble. The speaking part of my brain has shut off.
Everyone is staring at us. I can feel Jill trembling. I can’t tell if she’s more angry or shocked or embarrassed.
I feel my dick going limp inside her.
Greg lowers the camera. “Uh... we didn’t know,” he says apologetically.
Sarah and Scott are both just staring at us still, locked in our sex pose.
Then my words come back. “It’s okay,” I say to Greg with a blank stare in a numb tone. “No worries man.”
It’s not the same as walking in on two people fucking... there’s no door to awkwardly close and exit through here. The blankets are strewn across the floor now. Everyone just stares, dumbstruck.
Truth or Dare doesn’t necessarily lead to sex or orgies, but it raises the sexual energy in a room, and so it’s a step in the right direction. Jill and I just decided to take a leap that night. Too bad it ended a little unsexily.
“We’re fucking,” Jill blurts out.
Sarah nods. “Yeah... yeah you are...”
When I told this story to my friend, he called me a liar. Then he asked me if I ever got to fuck Jill again, for real.
Despite not believing the story, or at least, claiming to not believe it, my friend kept pestering me, asking me if I ever got to sleep with Jill again.
Funny how everyone always asks that when they hear this story.
The thing with sneaky, naughty sex, is that it’s only fun if you get away with it. People always talk about the thrill of getting caught during sex. But let me tell you, when you get caught having sex, and I mean really caught—not your mom and dad come home and know you’re in your bedroom with your girlfriend and open the door for the briefest of moments and realize you’re doing what they, at some level, knew you were doing, and quickly exit; but your friends, completely in shock at the fact that you’re fucking, and have been fucking, one of your best friends, right in front of them, and the entire revealing realization has been filmed—it’s not hot or sexy or thrilling at all.
If you’re going to be sneaky, or naughty, or sexy, just remember: sometimes friends fuck you, one way or the other.
Part 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11



August 10th, 2009 on 6:55 pm
Moar.
August 10th, 2009 on 10:35 pm
oh man, I thought I was reading the whole story!! I set in the for long haul only to be cut off short :( haha can't wait for the next post!
August 11th, 2009 on 5:29 pm
Where is the rest? This is seriously too good to just end. What happened? Is there an ending? Where are parts 8,9,10 and 11?
August 11th, 2009 on 6:52 pm
More would be good.
August 11th, 2009 on 6:59 pm
Dude wtf,!!!! Add the rest of the story already!!!!!
August 11th, 2009 on 7:23 pm
yea wtf
August 11th, 2009 on 7:39 pm
You have to continue this is like torture.
August 11th, 2009 on 7:46 pm
Amazing story! I just started reading your blog because of the video "While I was away", and I love it!
August 11th, 2009 on 7:56 pm
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT ;)
August 11th, 2009 on 7:58 pm
Wow, you are a great writer. I was just casually web surfing during my lunch break, found your "while I was away" video, continued onto your blog, found this story, kept reading even after my break was over, and realized I was turned on while at work. Fortunately I'm a girl so it's easy to keep that my little secret.
August 11th, 2009 on 8:05 pm
haha this wins. wd so far. :-)
August 11th, 2009 on 8:43 pm
f*cken hot as hell! you have to tell us the rest!
August 11th, 2009 on 8:53 pm
He's blue-ballin' us.
August 11th, 2009 on 8:54 pm
I started reading cause of that video about your ex, but I'm really liking your stories!
Kinda getting me going, in the least gay way possible.
August 11th, 2009 on 9:46 pm
Ya this is total BS! You knew exactly what you were doing with the video and this article! Dammit…
August 11th, 2009 on 9:55 pm
read all of your stories JD, fucking epic.
waiting for more!
August 11th, 2009 on 10:15 pm
I literally, out loud, said NONONO when I found out I was at the end. Keep it up (ha!) please :)
August 11th, 2009 on 10:21 pm
LOL WHERE THE FUCK IS THE REST LOL hahahahaha I just read all of it… and there's no ending… HELLO? LOL
August 11th, 2009 on 11:46 pm
Come on, wheres the rest? Sooner it gets put up, happier I shall be. Me wanty end, so I can properly have fun with it!
August 12th, 2009 on 12:00 am
JD THIS IS AMAZING!!! I'm sooo turned on, I want moooooreeeee ;]
August 12th, 2009 on 12:23 am
That's the trait of a good storyteller: you leave the reader wanting more
August 12th, 2009 on 2:32 am
haha, nothing i can say that hasn't been said in any of the posts above
stellar, unless you plan on writing 8 through 11 you're as much of a tease as jill
August 12th, 2009 on 8:15 am
MOAR PLZ
August 12th, 2009 on 8:17 am
Show us the rest, lol
August 12th, 2009 on 12:34 pm
Hi, I found your website on the internet and was wondering when you are going to finish this story. I'm gagging man
August 12th, 2009 on 1:18 pm
Hahaha, about the comment by the anonymous girl-turned-on-at-work — ditto!
August 12th, 2009 on 1:23 pm
Man, this site is great. Another follower directed by While I Was Away on College Humor and Digg. You've become an overnight sensation and it's awesome.
August 12th, 2009 on 4:10 pm
Come on man the we are waiting for the other parts :D
August 12th, 2009 on 4:31 pm
Another from 'While I was Away'. Excellent story and I want more, but I have to wonder, didn't you think of STDs when goin down like that with no rubber?
August 12th, 2009 on 5:22 pm
I just read this after your " While I Was Away " video on youtube, and hit straight on the link when it was done, glad i did now…
this stuff is better than watching a movie, keep it coming!!! preferably all now!!! aha!
Rich
August 12th, 2009 on 10:28 pm
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO this beats harry potter
August 12th, 2009 on 10:41 pm
Anonymous girl turned on at work #3 right here!!!
August 12th, 2009 on 11:09 pm
Wheres the rest….. Anonymous girl turned on at work #4
August 13th, 2009 on 12:25 am
Good thing I'm patient …… but don't keep us all waiting for too long for the next "installment" !!
August 13th, 2009 on 1:39 am
I'm actually super wet reading this. Turned on girl #5! Hurry up!
August 13th, 2009 on 1:41 am
That 'While I was Away' video is def. getting you a shitload of new fans.
Just saw the video, came here, read about how your teasing with this story line and decided to give it a read. Its fucking great.
I will def. be back to read the rest once its up.
August 13th, 2009 on 11:25 am
Another While I Was Away dude here, and man, your work is great. Just don't forget to post more oftenly now that there's a shitload of people.
August 13th, 2009 on 12:00 pm
jill is amazing! wheres the rest!
August 13th, 2009 on 12:57 pm
This is the internet so I'm guessing the "turned on girls" are really doods. I'll say it if no body eles will -= this story has me hard as a rock!
August 13th, 2009 on 2:05 pm
Turned on Girl-at-Work #6 (trust me… ALL girl)
August 13th, 2009 on 6:23 pm
#7…
August 13th, 2009 on 6:34 pm
turned on girl at work #7!!! All girl here…whew…you're killing me, please please finish so I can!
August 13th, 2009 on 7:52 pm
turned on girl at work #8 Trust me, well I am a mom!
August 13th, 2009 on 9:39 pm
Not just a writer, you also have some knowledge on how to make something popular, brilliant. And on the story since I’m a guy and the first response will be, why should I compliment on the story when there is already 9 turned on girls/ladies (the count was messed up at number 8:))
On the other hand you have an excellent virtue of telling a story almost like my grandparents, when they tell you a story you can almost smell the air not just picture the place and situation except in this case it is purely sexual :) but it is so vivid, then again the girls has proven this point.
P.S
I have passed the Away video and your stories to all my friends so just a heads up, you have visits from Macedonia, far far away…
August 14th, 2009 on 12:02 am
Id really like to know if this is real ? friggin awesome if it is…but still…..
August 14th, 2009 on 1:22 am
The crazy thing about this is that Jill sounds just like someone I know from school, the physical description and all. Her name was even Jill and we used to flirt like that all the time. And I'm wishing I could've done to my Jill what you got to do with yours
August 14th, 2009 on 2:09 am
WHAT THE FUCK ITS NOT COMPLETE?
SHITS GOLDEN YO
August 14th, 2009 on 4:11 am
please finish this!
this is pure gold
August 14th, 2009 on 5:29 am
turned on girl at home #10….I want to do this to someone at a party one day ;)
August 14th, 2009 on 6:34 am
AMAZING!!
August 14th, 2009 on 7:52 am
Simply: ROTFL
August 14th, 2009 on 8:19 am
hey come on that wasnt long enough ;) dont leave us hanging lol
August 14th, 2009 on 1:06 pm
MORE
August 14th, 2009 on 3:31 pm
TEASE!
August 14th, 2009 on 3:54 pm
This is brilliant! Keep it cummin'! Sorry, I meant, uhm, keep updatin'!
August 14th, 2009 on 4:09 pm
not fair!
August 14th, 2009 on 6:41 pm
I have a feeling Gregs going to have more than chips on his face toniiiight ;)
August 14th, 2009 on 7:05 pm
#11 damn :P
August 14th, 2009 on 7:37 pm
fuck this is awesome xD
August 14th, 2009 on 7:58 pm
Awwww lame, I had already known this much happened when you left us off at part 7
August 14th, 2009 on 8:37 pm
Ooooooh the torture.
August 14th, 2009 on 9:42 pm
this wasn't long enough, there wasn't really anything new, everything you said was what we already knew! Not fair!
August 15th, 2009 on 2:50 am
The "holy shit" lines are hilarious. I spit Diet Coke out laughing.
August 15th, 2009 on 1:23 pm
I found your site through a video you did.
Its amazing.
myspace.com/trueformgraphics
August 15th, 2009 on 9:21 pm
This is gnarly. Keep em coming (no pun intended)
August 15th, 2009 on 10:27 pm
Why can't this shit happen in real life? Ahahaha
August 15th, 2009 on 11:40 pm
MOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!…. NOW, please :D
August 16th, 2009 on 2:28 am
oh man, i'm curious to know how you're gonna get out of this without everyone knowing
August 16th, 2009 on 4:56 am
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
August 16th, 2009 on 7:50 am
where is the rest????
August 16th, 2009 on 10:32 am
Yeah, this brought down the high hopes I was having for this story. It's sucha amazing piece, but this part just kinda stalled. Like they said, nothing new was brought in with this part. And I didn't feel it this time; the descriptions and details weren't there. Still looking forward to the rest though with much anticipatioN!
August 16th, 2009 on 12:47 pm
Indeed awesome. i didn't believe I could get a hard on and then 'release' the tension from merely reading a story. It is a gift :-)
August 16th, 2009 on 11:31 pm
OH DAMN!
August 16th, 2009 on 11:38 pm
ohhhh snap lol
greatest line -"I probably look like I’m trying real hard to push out a shit."
August 17th, 2009 on 12:20 am
aw man, this is great can't wait for the next part
August 17th, 2009 on 1:22 am
I need to know the rest. you cant just give me a colon puncher then tell me no more!.. junkie needs his fiz with ya words being conjumbled in mah brain boz!
August 17th, 2009 on 1:38 am
hahahaha bro. continue this TONIGHT. I MUST FIND OUT THE END.
August 17th, 2009 on 1:39 am
Love this shit. haha
August 17th, 2009 on 2:15 am
Haha this was the greatest chapter yet. "What?!" "No!"
"Okay, Sarah, take off your top."
And I could see this coming from the moment she placed her underwear in your hand. You're going to get dared to do something that requires…not fucking jill?
August 17th, 2009 on 2:17 am
Sara: "Jill and JD should have sex too!"
JD and Jill: "we already have been"
don't need to wait for the last two parts now :)
August 17th, 2009 on 3:14 am
haha, way to ruin the ending!
August 17th, 2009 on 3:45 am
i cant wait for the next part ;)
August 17th, 2009 on 4:04 am
Nice chapter!!!! Keep 'em coming! (So to speak)
August 17th, 2009 on 5:02 am
You do realize that people are addicted to you writing about your sex life.. lol
August 17th, 2009 on 6:46 am
Thisn is gold. I need to know what's cumming!
August 17th, 2009 on 6:46 am
Was that a typo? haha
August 17th, 2009 on 8:43 am
love this shit xD update it every night? eh..
August 17th, 2009 on 9:28 am
Sarcasm Fairy;
Probably because we can't get sneaky naughty sex ourselves ;-)
August 17th, 2009 on 9:40 am
Fuckin' Ayyyy dude, you need to just post the last 2 parts. No more of this cliffhanger shit.
August 17th, 2009 on 12:23 pm
Ah what an ending! cant wait for the next part.
August 17th, 2009 on 12:36 pm
omg omg omg i cant wait for the rest lol
start writing already!! ;-)
August 17th, 2009 on 9:47 pm
that made me horny.
August 17th, 2009 on 10:31 pm
Aww shit man, that cliffhanger was a cheap shot ;)
August 17th, 2009 on 11:50 pm
but a big part of me, probably the penis, dosen't
OHOHOHOHOHOHHH
CLEVER ONE!
August 18th, 2009 on 5:02 am
JD you're killing me!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know more!
August 18th, 2009 on 9:12 am
JD you can fuck me in the ass.
I'm a guy.
August 18th, 2009 on 4:37 pm
come ooooooon!
August 19th, 2009 on 3:43 am
I've got it…..Greg, you sit on JD's lap.
August 19th, 2009 on 5:02 am
lol… i'm impressed. Didn't think this would create so much anticipation!
August 19th, 2009 on 9:09 am
how did reading something just give me a boner??if you would have finished the story i most likely would have blown a bean in my pants…and im sitting in class =)
August 19th, 2009 on 2:07 pm
When's the new installment? I must say, despite originally finding this extemely immature, I'm starting to giggle remembering some of my own stories! Write on dear boy!
August 19th, 2009 on 4:04 pm
Come on .. the next part !!
August 19th, 2009 on 7:23 pm
boing!
August 20th, 2009 on 12:15 pm
CUM 0N
August 20th, 2009 on 2:55 pm
That wasn't enough :(
August 20th, 2009 on 3:14 pm
Hmm, someone pulls off the blanket next? :)
August 20th, 2009 on 3:38 pm
Come on bro, that took like 20 seconds to read, we need more, your in the big leagues now.
August 20th, 2009 on 3:51 pm
Is there any truth to any of this, or is it 100% fiction?
August 20th, 2009 on 3:55 pm
They pull off the blanket, cos they knew the whole time, and then take the picture! Course this freaks the chick out so she dips!
perhaps.
August 20th, 2009 on 4:04 pm
it's a video! they must be onto them…
August 20th, 2009 on 4:17 pm
Yah, I want more.
August 20th, 2009 on 4:18 pm
yeah seriously, that was a cock tease. last part better be GOOOOOOOD!!! awesome writing nonetheless.
August 20th, 2009 on 4:36 pm
come on mate… did that take you a minute to write? Let's have the rest guv.
August 20th, 2009 on 5:40 pm
They know you're doing her and filming you hahahaha.
August 20th, 2009 on 6:41 pm
That was shorter than the Man Shorts :(
C'mon man!
August 20th, 2009 on 7:32 pm
come on people, that was the perfect way to setup the finale. just a little taste to leave you wanting more. have you never read a novel that has 20-30 page chapters and all of a sudden you get a one-pager that leaves you wanting MORE?
August 20th, 2009 on 7:59 pm
You call THAT a chapter?
August 20th, 2009 on 8:48 pm
Their gonna rip the blanket off, or something to the extent of them getting caught doing it. Then the only question is to finish or not.
August 20th, 2009 on 8:49 pm
Oh, also they will take the picture immediately after ripping off the blanket, so they have a picture of them fucking.
August 20th, 2009 on 9:16 pm
You're an awful awful man jd. Atleast I have something to look forward to on sunday. They're sooooo gonna tear the blanket off and take a picture.
August 20th, 2009 on 11:01 pm
dude, im almost done with my time machine, so i can get part 11 quicker.
August 20th, 2009 on 11:05 pm
wow, part time is the worst one yet.. You have got to release the last one sooner.. lol
August 20th, 2009 on 11:20 pm
when greg takes the pic, Sarah or Scott rip the blanket off
August 21st, 2009 on 2:04 am
I know what's coming: It's a video!
August 21st, 2009 on 4:58 am
seriously. you're killing me here.
August 21st, 2009 on 6:00 am
JD why are you teasing…anyway it's wonderful. I have a similar fantasy, just wish I had the guts to carry it out. Awesome dude, you really got this chica heated up. All the other stories are wonderfully hilarious too. Sure brightens up my day :)
August 21st, 2009 on 6:26 am
Blanket is gonna get pulled off. EXPOSED!!!
August 21st, 2009 on 10:50 am
OMG theyre gonna rip off the blanket and be exposed!
August 21st, 2009 on 5:27 pm
Son of a bitch! Almost screamed at the last sentence. Awesome stories man keep it up!
August 21st, 2009 on 7:18 pm
They are gonna pretend to take a pic, and while JD and jill are distracted they will rip the blanket off them. I bet their friends are onto them having sex by now.
So they will rip the blanket off and the two of them will just be sitting there naked from the waist down.
August 22nd, 2009 on 12:53 am
Oh No! I think i know where this is going… Uh Oh.!
August 22nd, 2009 on 3:23 am
lol the sheets comin off… definitely !
August 22nd, 2009 on 6:30 am
balls
August 22nd, 2009 on 7:04 pm
Just came off the time machine. The other three notice the underwear that was on the ground and realize what has been going on the entire time.
August 22nd, 2009 on 11:29 pm
Cant wait!
August 23rd, 2009 on 12:37 am
i want the ending!!! haha
August 23rd, 2009 on 2:45 am
greg pulls off the blanket trying to snap a pic of the two in their underwear but instead gets more than he bargained for. lol. thats the end.
August 23rd, 2009 on 3:17 am
AHHHHHH!!!!! You bastard! Finish the damnn thing already!!! …that could be taken in more ways than one…
August 23rd, 2009 on 5:07 am
I hope that last one has the photo with it!
August 23rd, 2009 on 8:09 am
eh. so so ending to an otherwise exciting story
August 23rd, 2009 on 8:11 am
whoops, pardon that last comment. didn't realize there were 11 parts
August 23rd, 2009 on 9:58 am
Come on JD don't leave us hanging but great writing!
August 23rd, 2009 on 12:37 pm
i think they'll pull the blanket away before the picture
August 23rd, 2009 on 4:31 pm
oh no! that is the most tragic thing I've ever heard :(
August 23rd, 2009 on 4:51 pm
epic. truly epic.
August 23rd, 2009 on 4:58 pm
Sorry pal, I just can go: AHAHAHAHAHA XD
August 23rd, 2009 on 5:04 pm
Lets see the VIDEO!!!!! :)
August 23rd, 2009 on 5:24 pm
So…. about Jill… you never answered! ;)
August 23rd, 2009 on 5:38 pm
Great ending, dude, bravo.
August 23rd, 2009 on 5:48 pm
Wow! Amazing story. I can't wait for more!
August 23rd, 2009 on 5:52 pm
but u did fuk her again right??? RIGHT!?!??!?! lol
August 23rd, 2009 on 5:59 pm
I thought it would end by all of you having sex as a orgie.
August 23rd, 2009 on 6:14 pm
Post the video!
August 23rd, 2009 on 6:42 pm
dude, awesome story. ending wasn't as good as all of the awesome fucking tho.
August 23rd, 2009 on 6:59 pm
hahaha
''sometimes friends fuck you, one way or the other''
so true xD
August 23rd, 2009 on 7:50 pm
Oh my… Well then, how do you just get up after that happens? Tell them to walk away and carry Jill to a bedroom? Plus it's recorded…
For yall's sake I wish you wouldn't have been caught :p
August 23rd, 2009 on 8:13 pm
haha awesome story. post the video!!
August 23rd, 2009 on 8:17 pm
what? that's it?
August 23rd, 2009 on 9:09 pm
:(
August 23rd, 2009 on 9:18 pm
I suspected it was movie, but didn't see this one coming! I enjoyed following the story and reading it very much. Looking forward to the next one!
By the way, have you ever thought of bundling your stories into a booklike thing?
August 23rd, 2009 on 9:18 pm
Kinda weird ending, no explination of what happened AFTER they saw you…I must say I'm a bit dissapointed
August 23rd, 2009 on 9:22 pm
Yeah. I saw that coming. But it was still hilarious.
“It’s okay,” I say to Greg with a blank stare in a numb tone. “No worries man.”
Wow! =]].
August 23rd, 2009 on 10:01 pm
lol
August 23rd, 2009 on 10:09 pm
If you don't want to talk about whether or not you had sex with Jill again (and you're right, it is extremely intriguing to know if there's ever a follow-up sexual encounter after an embarassment so brutal), fine.
But you've clearly omitted the missing 12th part of this story. How does the night end? What happens after? Did you have to bargain to delete the footage? Does everyone go home? Can you or Jill live the incident down?
August 23rd, 2009 on 10:34 pm
OK…did NOT see that one coming! Whoa!
August 23rd, 2009 on 10:52 pm
I think the reason NO ONE has commented yet is: Everything you've said is right. There is just nothing left to say…
WOW, reading this story is like being in the experience with you man, the ending killed my boner too. I would've been horrified! Nothing left for the spank tank here…
August 23rd, 2009 on 11:19 pm
aahhahah yes!! Your my hero man, forever a fan!
August 23rd, 2009 on 11:32 pm
Lol wow man. Sooo the video go up on YouTube?
August 24th, 2009 on 12:31 am
Haha when i read that I felt like i was in that spot, all the emotions and shame and adrenaline. I'm sorry man, wish it hadn't ended like that. Atleast you weren't forced to blow it inside her and have little Jills and JD's runnin around right? Haha
August 24th, 2009 on 12:32 am
the ending shoulda been that you guys orgasmed.
August 24th, 2009 on 1:13 am
Definitely saw it coming as soon as they mentioned the camera. However, from my limited experience, most women seem have a natural reflex to cover up when suddenly exposed. The same way guys react to protect their nether regions when something approaches that area with volocity. Like Janet Jackson's breif flash, it seems to me that a breif flash is all they would have seen as Jill dove for cover and her hands immediately went down to cover her crouch.
I'm just sayin'
Still, a great story and if it were a porno I would watch the video over and over.
August 24th, 2009 on 1:49 am
I think I speak for everyone when I say that we need to see the video. Of course you're going to blur the faces and stuff, we know that, but we need to see something! By the way, awesome story!
August 24th, 2009 on 4:38 am
Post the video J.D!! AWESOME STORY BUT WE MUST SEE THE VIDEO!!
August 24th, 2009 on 4:54 am
Just shut the fuck up and tell me if you fucked her for real.
August 24th, 2009 on 4:55 am
lol, nicely put JD.
August 24th, 2009 on 8:06 am
You really need to work on the endings of your stories, you can't just end with Sarah's comment. Cliffhangers are ok if there are more episodes, but not in the final one. Just left me with a feeling that something is missing from the story.
August 24th, 2009 on 10:26 am
God knows why everyone is asking to see the video. It's a STORY people. It's very obviously not true!!!
Good story and really encourages you to read on.
But a very disappointing ending. The ending isn't up to your usual standards. I would have a think about re-writing the end of it. You could get a much better finale I'm sure.
August 24th, 2009 on 10:30 am
it takes a great writer to give us a story that we can't wait to hear the end of…. only to leave us wanting more hahah. VIDEO!!!!!!
keep it up man
August 24th, 2009 on 1:14 pm
wow man…. but wtf happend after???
August 24th, 2009 on 2:04 pm
at that point a real man stands up, still in her, lifting her with ur arms as well as ur cock and ask everyone to either leave the room or shut the hell up while you finish off! hahaha. Way to go man!
However the video is a must see for us all, put your money where your mouth is man! ;)
August 24th, 2009 on 6:21 pm
yo who is the girl in the photo at the top?
August 24th, 2009 on 11:45 pm
As awkward as it is, it would be nice if you told us how it ends. What happens from there to the end of the night?
August 25th, 2009 on 7:21 pm
Amazing. Truly fucking epic. This is the one story I've read in separate parts (I just read the others from start to finish, as they were already done when I got here) and the cliffhangers were totally fucking rape-edge-night-orgy-badger-whacking-awesome. *cue applause*
August 25th, 2009 on 10:46 pm
A really great story, but I don't believe it's real.
August 26th, 2009 on 9:38 am
Not real – In 87 – there was no way you could mistake a video camara for a normal one.
August 27th, 2009 on 12:17 am
Wow. A whole bunch of hot and heavy grinding and you guys don't even get to finish up?
For something that sexy you got jipped JD!
August 28th, 2009 on 2:49 am
POST THE VIDEO DUUUUDE ! :D
August 30th, 2009 on 3:34 pm
Outstanding story. Very well crafted. Talk about suspense! Too bad all these anonymous coward commenters can't separate fact from fiction. "Post the video, dood!" I appreciated the sense of anticipation you created, though, and I suspect that was your point.
September 15th, 2009 on 3:58 am
love the "naughtiness" of doing it where you're not supposed to
October 6th, 2009 on 2:23 pm
I’ve been to many a “high-school” or college party, often once enough drink has been consumed people suggest games and Truth or Dare always seems to be the on chosen. And in my opinion there is no better game for a group of drunk guys and girls to play because it lets you see and do stuff you would normally be to self-conscious/nervous to ask for.
And also you are an amazing writer of these kind of stories. Keep up the good work.
October 10th, 2009 on 11:20 pm
[...] JD’s Man Stories: Jill was a sexy cutie. And she was just a friend. [...]
October 11th, 2009 on 5:16 am
[...] JD’s Man Stories: Jill was a sexy cutie. And she was just a friend. [...]
October 22nd, 2009 on 12:25 am
Amazing story!
November 23rd, 2009 on 11:45 pm
this is truly the work of a Grammy nominated author
January 3rd, 2010 on 1:12 am
are these all true stories
February 8th, 2010 on 6:07 pm
I won’t say that this is true or not, but you definitely can’t rule it out.
A friend of mine was at a party a while back and had sex with her bf in a jacuzzi with three or four other people there.
I’ve never actually had sex in a room full of friends, but I’ve fingered my girlfriend in a situation like this under a jacket, gotten a couple of handjobs like this.
So for people saying that “That never happens in real life!”, I think you’re just not living that kind of life. ;)
Does make you wonder, though: how many times have YOUR friends gotten away with something like this without you knowing?